Critique needed please
Hi… I've been working on a novel for some time and would really love an honest critique of my work. It's a m/f erotic thriller with a dark theme. I’m in desperate need of a beta to check for plot inconsistencies, irregularities in continuity, characterization and grammar etc… All constructive criticism is welcomed with open arms.

I'm really sorry, but I don't have the time to beta right now. I hope you find one!