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veinglory- 03-10-2008
The last sentence you wrote!
Are you writing. Then come by each day and share the last sentence you got down :) “What is she going to do… fly?” the guard said.

Dusk- 03-11-2008

He did not cry out again during the night.

Lamia- 03-12-2008

The factory churned out joke items; sets of false noses, moustache and glasses, clockwork false teeth, artificial dog mess, party streamers, funny hats and so on.

MarianneLaCroix- 03-12-2008

“I don’t know what else to say as an excuse for Fredrick other than he wasn’t himself when I found him a few months ago.”

Crimpson- 03-12-2008

“Before I learned to control it, I burned everything, they banished me.”

veinglory- 03-12-2008

Winter frost, black magic, he had thought the wolfkin a monster then… and still wanted him.

Maura Anderson- 03-15-2008

Yesterday's last line: When he looked up and met Raven’s searching gaze, all he could do was nod.

kmfrontain- 03-15-2008

The minions raised a howl of concord, he delivered the evil-demon-lord belly laugh, and an arrow thunked into his thigh.

Bayou Bill- 03-17-2008

It was the best of sex, it was the worst of sex... For some reason this line sounds a bit familiar. But I still think it might make a catchy opening. Bayou Bill 8)

MauiPotiki- 03-19-2008

Two lines, but they sorta go as one; "Dixon meant to find out the truth. And this time it was going to be the whole truth."

Bayou Bill- 03-19-2008

Two lines, but they sorta go as one; "Dixon meant to find out the truth. And this time it was going to be the whole truth." IMHO, you're right--they do sorta go as one. You might think about connecting them with an em dash ( -- ) Bayou Bill 8)

Stella Omega- 03-21-2008

"Every time I look down there, I remember why I left. Any warrants still out for us?" oops, two sentences...

MauiPotiki- 03-21-2008

IMHO, you're right--they do sorta go as one. You might think about connecting them with an em dash ( -- ) Bayou Bill 8) I've never used em dashes before. Perhaps this might be a first time!

Maura Anderson- 03-21-2008

Her name. (Last sentence of today's Friday Flash).

Dusk- 03-23-2008

Okay, I'm *really* depressed that I don't have a new line to contribute. Can I contribute instead the last sentence that I edited (or rather, considered whether to edit)? "I held his letter in my hand for a moment more, and then left the chamber in order to meet with my master." (Same series, different novel than the previous quote.) Stella Omega, your contribution is wonderfully intriguing.

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