The Regent's Bridle
Okay. 1st draft done. 70,000 words, high fantasy, no sex, menage. I need a harsh, pitiless beta-reader.

I'd offer, but I'm kinda swamped now. LOL Good luck, though!

I'll give it a go if you want to send it over. When d'you need it by?

This one really does have issues. i was fairly close to deleting the whol thing and deciding NaNo is the devil. but then I deleted chapter 1 entirely and it looks a lot batter that way. Chapter one was headhopperama. However that does mean a few things just don't get explained now...

I'm almost afraid to read it. LOL. But send it anyway and I'll get my nice big RED PEN ready. ::smirk::

Okay, will send tomorrow after having one last look at and trying to winnow out the egregius typos at least ;) The main things I need are --Is it blatantly awful and I would be better off writing new stuff than tryong to rescue it --Are there any issues left unclear, continuity errors etc --proofreading Feel free to do it in chunkas and send back as you go rather than all at once--it is a longish one. Thanks!

No worries - I'll look out for it tomorrow. And the chunks idea is a good one! :)